Broken - Comments

I love it

booooob......great

Chapter 1 - a great start! You've set the story up well. It didn't need to be any longer, it's enough. There were a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes, but that's just one of my OCD things coming through. Like I say a great start

SEX INCOMING! :P

Don't you just HATE it when you don't get comments?
Here's another one ;D

I really think you should put some drama in the next chapter. Or sex. We all love sex (Y)

Haha, Bob's getting a taste of life now x]
Btw, thanks for the mention, I appreciate it (:

Hmmm... Poor Frankie... I wonder how that is going to bear on the rest of the story... More soon please!

not anymore!

Oh God, poor Frankie! Jut to let you know, chapter one is called "chapter one", but the others have numbers instead of words.

Whoo hoo! I liked this chapter... Im wondering whats gonna happen next!

Yay, deds! Aw, poor Frankie is shy XD
Write more soon (:

I like this... I thought it was going to be different when I first started reading it, but now Im excited... I really like Frank/Bob pairings and I hardly ever find any! Im excited!

Good ideas. Who does Frank like - Bob or Gerard?
Write more soon!

I like your writing style, though I don't know what's going on in the story yet mainly because there's only one chapter...but good overall :) Keep writing!