Look At The Mess You've Made - Comments

this is really good! :)

oh hey so I just read this and I didn't even realize it was your story until I randomly clicked on your profile...
ANYWAY!
I love this. A lot :D

DON'T CHA JUST HATE IT WHEN MIBBA DIES WHEN YOU WROTE A REALLY GOOD COMMENT?

Anyway, this one will be better.

I lovelovelove this. Brianna, you need to write things more often, you are good at it. So I'll just gush about the title, cos I love the song and Joshuaaa is probably band boy of the minute for me right now. I liked the lack of dialogue, and I think it was well thought out, and I salute you for not going off into a flashback, like so many stories do. It was all from Kallie's viewpoint, and you could feel her hurt and how much she truly despised Josh for being such a dick. And I loveee that you wrote him as a little cheater. He's almost always the total sweetheart in stories where he's involved, so it's quite refreshing to see him do some wrong. I loved it, and I'm in favour of you writing a full length story. (:

Okay, so I read it and loved it! (There were a few errors though.)
I think you should make this into a story.

CALLED IT I JUST KNEW IT WAS GOING TO BE ABOUT FRANSEXY

I'm going to go and actually read it now, I just needed to make sure that I was the first comment :)