Gypsy - Comments

i would love to read this, if only the font wasn't so small and unable to read.

JImmy's right. Brian should take that to heart.

God, Jimmy's brilliant. Honestly. He's the smartest ever. If only Brian was smart enough to take his advice, which I truly hope he is, but part of me doubts it. It's sad that I doubt his intelligence so much, but alas, what do you expect? XP

Hmm, was that a sweet side of Brian we just saw in the end then?
I like the chapters that you do in his POV, I like the insight into his thoughts and feelings about the situations he finds himself in.
What Jimmy had to say made me smile and I hope Brian takes notice.
Awesome as always, more soon please?
Oh and he needs to get rid of that skank asap! She's just foul!

I still stand by it, I like Brian's POV. Maybe a little more here and there? ;)

Update soon, darling, as you usually do. :)

“Ouch,” I laughed. “That hurt my soul, Jim.” I'm going to start saying that.

Anything from Brian's POV is always great insight and makes me hate him just a bit less so I enjoyed this update. That said, I still don't like him. lol. Though, I do think that it was bit sweet that he was concerned about her sleeping in the booth and gave her a cover instead of being his usual dickish self and ignoring it. Sweet, but he's still a self centered prick...

And Jimmy's wisdom was very well put and beautifully stated. Much better than how I phrase things. XD

I love that you did Brian's POV. Jimmy sure was very enlightening. I hope it sticks. He wanted to put that girl in his bunk, I know it. ;)

Why am I just so against Brian and Larissa getting together?
Does this make me a bad person?
I love Bria's pov as well. Wise Jimmy is wise.

larissa is one kick ass girl... she totally need to beat brian up just coz she can hahaha!

i love this story

I very much like wise Jimmy. x)
Brian FINALLY gets a lesson on treating Larissa like a human. It only took forever, the fuck.
lol, I love these little glimpses into Brian's head.

GOD I LOVED IT. Honestly. It was amazing. I'm going to text you and tell you how awesome it was, but I figured I'd better comment first. I loved how Brian held it over her head that she had to say it. And I loved the fact that she wouldn't. God. I just loved this update as a whole.

You know, as much as I adore her and as much as I despise Brian, I think that the reason why this shit keeps happening to her is her fault. Not all of it, of course, but most of it. She likes to fuck with people. She's even admitted that and pretty much everyone has warned her not to do anything with Brian. I know that sometimes lust is a bit uncontrollable but I think it goes deeper than that for the two of them. Like Rhian and the title of the last chapter said, it all boils down to pride and in my opinion, a bit of insecurity on both of their parts.

Whatever. lol. I can't wait to see what happens on tour with them. XD

YOU SKANK. YOU TORTUROUS, EVIL, DEMONOID SKANK. OH MY GOD. I AM DYING FOR AN UPDATE NOW.

Seriously, though, I loved it. Beyond loved it. And you have to update soon because this story is my fucking crack, and you never give me enough of it.

hahaha I loved the update!

As much as I hate to admit it, I'd do just what Larissa did. I don't beg. I do throw shows however. Is this my cock-block for cock-blocking you the other night?

Somehow I knew Brian was up to no good. I laughed so hard at what he did to Larissa at the end. As much of an ass as he's been, at the same time she needed that as well. They should just both admit they want each other already and be done with it. These games are just crazy, even though so funny.

More soon?

I'm kinda enjoying this little game they have going on and really can't blame Brian for wanting to get his own back for what she did to him at the club. In the end it all comes down to pride (for the most part anyway)
Loved it, more soon? Please :)

Loved it!!! Dont worry about ur writing skills u r really gd so jus go wiv what comes to u lol plzz update soon!!!!!!! XD

hmmm awesome story!!!