To Hell With My Pride, Let It Fall Like Rain - Comments

This is the first time I've read a story about a celebrity, and I like that you used song titles as names for each chapter, however, the combo of the background color and the font color make it hard to read. The small font doesn't help with that either, but other than that I did truely enjoy the story!

I would have read this, but the font is way too small to read and the color are very bright and kind of hurt my eyes.

This is a really cool layout, but a little distracting. I could barely read the summary because of the small font and it being somewhat the same color, but otherwise, it was good. cool picture! This was a great story!!!! Great job

I hope I can say this... FUCK!!! That is a sticky sitiation that no one should be in!!

TEAM JONATHAN!! haha

aww!! dedicated to me!! yay!! well, another amazing chapeter!! yay!!

OUCHIE!

ha! thanks! Will try capitain!

I will not lie, I love this story!
I'm sad that I don't get to be the first to read them....
anyways!
Love the story, you better write more, type it up at home or something jeesh!

keep up the good work Captain! lol

"the contestant must stop the spinning captain's wheel using nothing but his..."

Chapter 5 will be coming this afternoon!

first comment! this is amazing, chapter 5 soon!!