Sometimes I Scream in Empty Rooms - Comments

Wow, this was amazing.
I love the way she reacted to everything.

I, too, would have liked it to be a bit longer, but it was fine the way it was.

Good job :D

Great job on the story. Very descriptive, and I think it appropriately descibes how someone might feel if the situation actually occured.
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One Shot For One Shot.

This was really good, a tad short, but good. I really liked the situation you put the character in and how you described her emotions. That was my favorite part. :)

I would've liked a bit more character description, though. It would've made for a smoother story.

But overall I really liked it! Good job! :)