Small Town Fairytale - Comments

awwww that was so cute! damn, this story is old ahah but I loved it!!! :D

I like :D

This was really cute. I liked it!

SO cute! loved!

I'm really impressed! You're writing skills are outstanding. Actually it's hard to describe - I'm simply speechless. You're my favourite author on Mibba.

It's been such a long time since I read something good on this site, and it was awesome to see that you posted this.

To be honest, this one shot made me lovesick XD

It was simply perfect.

Can't wait till you post more stuff!

Thank God! It has been driving me crazy to not be able to find any new Brian stories that are actually worth reading. And it's fantastic to hear that you're working on three - i can't wait until they're posted.
I really loved this story. It really could have been a full length, but as it was it was short and sweet.

Firsty I want to say that I agree wholeheartedly with Ali...I can't wait until you start posting Brian stuff again, you're one of my top 3 Brian writers on this site, and although I'm loving Loba, I'm really missing your Brian Stories!

As for this one shot it was, as I've come to expect from you, amazingly perfect :) And as sad as this may sound for a 27 year old...I do believe in Fairytales :) x

AWE!

That was so cute!

You've given me more inspiration to write, which is actually a little bad since it's all so hopelessly lovesick that I just wanna punch myself in the face at points. XD

Oh well.

I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL YOU START POSTING BRIAN STUFF AGAIN! I miss it!

this. This I absolutley love. The way you write, is just.. Wow! Not like most stories -he said she said kinda. You sure you're only 17? So impressed!!
And couldn't agree more with the one above... Bring back Brian! ;)

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To put it simply, she had knockers that could give Pamela Anderson a run for her money.

*snort*
LMFAO!
That is the best!

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But despite this knowledge, Sadie was still hopelessly in love with him.

Awww! So cute!

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In the kitchen, Rudy threw his hands up irritably and went back to cooking. “Girls,” he muttered under his breath.

Why do I picture a big man(like John Goodman), waving a spatula?!

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“What?” she demanded in a very Marsha-ish tone. Sadie disliked her already.

Marsha Brady?!
XDD

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Perhaps now would be as good of time as ever to mention that not only was Marsha Sadie’s boss, she was her foster mother as well.
Life is just super-dee-duper for Sadie.

Poor Sady.

And Nevermmind to the above comment.... LMAO!

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He chuckled. “You,” he repeated. “I never came around here just for the burgers, you know."

OH! SO SWEET!
*swoon*

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“I think I know you better than you may think,” he admitted quietly and for some reason looked nervous.

OMG! Brian is never nervous!

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What I’ve been trying to say is going to sound really stupid and pathetic now, but I’m in love with you, Sadie Evans.

Tear... Tear... Tear...
kay,
i'm good!

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No camera crew. No Ashton Kutcher.

I beat my meat like I'm a fucking butcher
and I punk the pussy like i'm ashton kutcher!!
...HU.
the only song i like...
<33

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Fairytales do exist. You never know; you could be living one this very moment.
All you need to do is open your eyes.

Awww.
I luh you and your cuteness KaterTater.
soo cute.
you should drop Jake and bring back Brian.
needs to be said.

It was very cute, I actually enjoyed it very much even though it's not my usual style. It's also very well written, something you don't see often on this site. Keep up the awesome work! You have a LOT of potential. (:

omg!!!!! why does it feel like forever and a day since i've
talked/commented you and your stuff?!?! lol. sorry bout
that. awesome oneshot. it was insanely cute :) ps: i've
been on a total disney craze too! i was cleaning out old
boxes in my closet and found all my old VHS tapes of
the lion king, little mermaid, oliver adn company, etc. etc.
hahaha. gotta love classic disney:) anyway great chapter!

aww I really liked it!!!