You're a Careful Catastrophe - Comments

This is a really good story! But just one thing, slash means same-gender stuff haha, but still good story! :)

Really good. I liked it a lot. More soon?

Really good.
I'll definately be subscribing,
I liked the pace of the whole thing

greaat more soon!?

Nice update

Hmm...I like it, but there's something missing from it. I don't know what that is, but it needs to sparkle. :D

niiceee:D

The original musefan:

S'great. Maybe a bit more explaination would do some good. I thought she got on the bus in her pyjamas...*sigh* I'm an idiot.

She did...

S'great. Maybe a bit more explaination would do some good. I thought she got on the bus in her pyjamas...*sigh* I'm an idiot.

It's...pretty good! Better than I can do, anyway.

I like it...please continue.

Great update!
more soon?

I really like your writing
more soon?
**subscribes**
:)

Omg..I love it , your writing is so awesome =)

XxJESUS_...._FREAKxX:

yeah i dont like pot....the only way i get high is off of Jesus....

So do I.

yeah i dont like pot....the only way i get high is off of Jesus....

Valium Freak:

Well I don't share your opinion on pot, but its okay guess
Try be more descriptivew on actions, I mean you are taking them a bit to fast, and in soem parts you use past tense and then present but its ok ;)

Thanks for the advice.
Pot can get you into trouble, hence why I feel the way I do towards it.

awesomeness update soon

I really like the story, keep up the good wrting!!

Well I don't share your opinion on pot, but its okay guess
Try be more descriptivew on actions, I mean you are taking them a bit to fast, and in soem parts you use past tense and then present but its ok ;)