Unlucky in Love - Comments

LOVED it. (:

I really like the ending. :D
I can't wait to read the sequel of this.

I loved the ending it only seemed fitting, that's where it all started didn't it? With the debate? Well anyways Ember's life's out of spot light and off to Emmas!

love the update :D

I can't wait for the next chapter..I want to find out what happens and why Ember lives her kids behind.
Amazing update :)

Updaaaate!

love the update :D

I think that you should also do Embers P.O.V. in the sequel to explain why she left her kidss !
I WANT HER TO COME BACKKK !

Great update :)
I love family time with them :)

love the update :D

I loved the update!
I'm so glad everything is okeydokey now. Love that (:

SHE LEFT BUT STAYED MARRIED?!?! No wonder Dominic's a mess. I feel bad for him for having to deal with two kids on his own but of course he works constantly ~.~ Ember what have you done? better yet, So much for not being like your mother. Im done with my rant now xD

It literally kills me to know that Ember is going to abandon them!

Great update :)

love the update :D

love the starting to the sequel :D

I am so unbelievably confused. Ember can't leave them! She just can't!!

I'm glad that Ember okay, but I can't believe she leaves her kids behind and goes off D<
I'm so excited for the sequel :)
Great work.

I'm soooooooo glad Ember's okay!
BUT I don't like the preview.

Well, I like it, but I don't like that Ember left and Dominic is being an ass D;
Poor Emma en Max. I want them to be a happy family =(

Update soon x3

I love that Dominic is with Ember but I REALLY don't want them to break up. I know it's what happens, but still, I hope she comes back. I love their relationship.

oh my gosh I love it!
I can't wait to read more!!! Im really glad you decided to write it on emma