It's Nothing Personal - Comments

I found this story to be underdeveloped. The introduction didn't give much for me to go on, and little to draw in. You don't use description, so I can't relate to the characters. The first chapter was somewhat interesting, though short, and should a loving relationship. Chapter 2 had nothing other than a fraction of dialogue. It should have been developed, maybe some description what they were doing, whose around, some feelings and emotions.

I'm glad that you've put this on hiatus to figure out the chapters because it really does need redeveloping. I hope it all works out for you!

You should really really update

Jack speaks german :]

@MusicMadness: I will; have a little more patience. Their actually coming after the guys leave the venue.

xD
awesome update!!!
how bout you start it off introducing the girls? :3 update soon cynnie!!!!

so far so good, i love it to death, im like obsessed with jack atm lol hes so fucking hot!

I loved this! (:
And I'd love to be Rian's girlfriend. He's gorgeous, fo sho. ;D

:O
Jack's smart?!
I never would've known! :P
jkjk
Jackie is the bestest!
Please update soon!
<3<3<3<3

update please!

I really like it so far and think that it will turn into an awesome story :)
Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love it so far :)
Please update soon!

<3<3<3<3<3<3

This story sounds Awesome so far :) I can't wait to read more. please update soon!

I cant wait to read the next chapter. Im so subscribing

Love my character!!!! She's so perty! Update soon Cyn! =)

yay! love my character! XD lol update soon please!

whoa love it!!!!! can't wait till the next chapta!! XD

I'm loving this story so far. :D
Update?

GREAT START! I LOVE IT ALREADY! =D