Creating Perfection - Comments

i really like this so far, subscribingg :)

I thought this was brilliant, guys!
Each of you write so well, and your styles fit together perfectly. I adore this!
I'm subscribing. It's so original...

There was a quote I adored in the first paragraph, but I can't seem to find it now. I will soon, haha xD

I normally don't ever read original fiction, especially without slash, but this is just fantastic!
I can't wait to read more, It's so... real!

wow.
this is beautifully written, could easily be from a professional author. can't wait to read more of it =]

Oh how can you say that sucked, it was amazing and I honestly mean that. I never really could understand that character when I made him but you created something brilliant right there. By far the best.

You two have done a good job here and I really want to read more baout this Daniel fellow.

Both of your chapters are pretty epic, and will no doubt put mine to shame.

Nice work on how you set out who Liz is, it was very well done and made things clear. I was going to say more but it's early. Sue me.

I have to say that you kicked my chapters butt. Very well written, I like that this gives a clear image of who she is. And the emphasis of her mother was well placed.

This is very well written between the two of you and I am interested to read the third one. I enjoyed it.

Ah Jim Halpert, that was amazing.
Especially because you're just beginning to write.
I really enjoyed the chapter and how you took over for the role of Henry.
You kept it correctly in the range of the first chapter :)
It was just great.

this seems really good
I like it so far
and for just starting writing
you're doing a pretty good job =]
i'm sure all of you will yay more please lol

I like the take you have on Henry. You took what I intially wrote and added depth to his character and it was overall well written for a first timer. And you ended it perfectly, I was hoping you'd come up with something for it.

The world is a very dull place, the black and white truths hidden by pasty blues like the sky and oppressing yellows like the sun.
That was really just so beautiful, I can't even tell you. You've used words that you usually would hear out of someone's mouth, much less read. I'm talking about oppressing, mostly. I love that you describe the world with an array of colors. Well done!

I once told Jamie Delanie that her non recyclable ziploc bags were bad for the environment and that every time she used one she killed a unicorn. Which I later on told her that unicorns were fake and she was a twit for believing in them in the first place. Not only did this make me laugh, but I can relate to it in some ways.I too, am somewhat like that at times. I don't care if it hurts someone, if they're in denial then hell. I think they need to hear it. I love that this story is different in the way that it has these 3 characters that I can already tell, will have something special to do in the other's life. Like the realist and the fake.

I can't believe I haven't checked this out sooner, I can't wait to see where it goes. You've got talent Maggie, seriously. I'm only mentioning you now ,seeing as that was your chapter.(; But I really can't wait to see what the other's have in store.

Great job!

I am completely interested in this :)
The chapter was perfect for luring me in, I want to know what this is going to turn into.

Which I later on told her that unicorns were fake and she was a twit for believing in them in the first place.
I pretty much fell in love with than line too.

This is interesting, and if I could figure out where it's going, I'd for sure co-write with you. But you probably wouldn't want that, I am terrible. xD

Which I later on told her that unicorns were fake and she was a twit for believing in them in the first place.

I just... love that. So much. Best line ever.
Really good though. I'm interested to see where you take this.

Very very beautifully written.

I am very interested as to how this will go...