Rooftops - Comments

I like this alot.

The way you write is very concise. I love that - you tell the reader so much in so few, but carefully chosen, words. I could see everything you were describing and, particularly in the second chapter, created a real element of panic, which I liked. In particular, this part:
" "Dammit Whit we don't have time for this! He's bleeding!" She urged looking back at her brother. The little blonde, Erik, sat beside him, pale as a sheet. He had taken his shirt off and was pressing it to Jude's wound."
The whole scene seems very rushed and hurried, which fits the situation perfectly.

It's great!

This is interesting! I like it!

The chappy's awesome :]
I like that they all make jokes, tho the situation's pretty serious and all.
I somehow never get who's Jude and who's Erik tho, but that's just my problem. I guess i found out now tho.^^
Can't wait for the next update!! :D

I love it! And I so want to know what happens to Jude. They just have to make it, maybe Jude's mom should get killed? Haha just kiddin^^

Anyways it's awesome, just like the prequel :D

As always, I loved it <3 I really really want to know what happens between Erik's father and Jude, I'm definitely rooting for the lovers!