i love it, please update again soon!! I love the whole surprise Vampire Academy involvement in the end though, brilliant!! Please keep it up, your good, your story is good too!!
I really love your story!! really really do!! i think you r doing a great job with an amazing plot!! one question! have you ever read Divine by Mistake by P.C. Cast? haha i think i know that answer though!
seventeen: Read the others but couldn't stop reading them. 13 MILLION DOLLARS?!?!?!?!?! Holy sticks on toast, I could buy the entire state of California with that money and still have enough to buy mansions around the world. Wondering if emmett is going to try and save her brother? Those were cute pictures that you described.
thirteen: So what happened with her? Was it the tracker? Hating the cops that arrested her. Can't wait to read the next chapter of this well-described story.
ten-twelve: Okay so it was too good to not stop reading. But I loved everything in the chapters. That was a great, and weird, way to introduce her half-brother. Can't wait to read the next one.
seven: Well, at least it wasn't the tracker. What kind of powers will she even have? Will they change her? What's going to happen next? Hope that the address they gave her keeps her uncle at bay for a while.
six: That was well-described and sad about her aunt at the same time. I was thinking that it was Emmett at first that heard the arguing? Wondering what's going to happen next?