nine: Will Alex tell anyone what he heard? Great descriptions and thought her unknowinly beating alex was hilarious. Hope you getting the next UPDATE up soon.
eight: Great descriptions. Not liking the prinipal now either; I mean who gives a size 6 (right?) girl a size 10 for no reason? I would have just given her another 6. Wondering what's going to happen next? What's up with the nice teacher?
seven: The plan was PURE EXCELLENCE. Hating the Snob Queen and wondering if she even has a name. Wondering what's going to happen with the principal (so sue me if it's spelled wrong)? Will her parents find out? Kinda pathetic that the one thing that teacher points out is Jack's there and that she's not allowed to have boys on ground. Yet not even notice the skirts too short. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
five: Ouch, hope you where able to get everything back. Great descriptions. And whatever was said before you mentioned the computer crashing; my answer's going to be Leave it alone, it's fine as is. Can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what happens next? Has her dad got an itching of what's going on?
four: Unless you already rewrote this; then DON'T, it's fine as is although on the part where alex says he seen a tear, might want to say " saw a tear". Other than that; can't wait to read the next chapter.
three: If you like wanna link stuff; just type [url=the address/]what you want to say[/url] and that's all there is to it; unless of course you already know how to do that, then nevermind. Liked the description of the room. Wondering what's going to happen next? How will she meet the guys? Can't wait to read and find out.
two: I think it's fine as is. Great descriptions too. Liking this one more and more. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.