Life as a Teenage Assassin - Comments

Fae and Shawn Woot Woot lol allthough Leo is adorable ;)

I love this story!

I reaaaallly liked this chapter
Truthfully I think that Zack and her would be the best couple because they are just so different and have awesome personalities I would love it if they ended up together
Eliza chick can go die (Im ok with that hehe)
More soon please?

awesome very awesome i love the story line hope you find you flash drive soon

definitely interesting, just read all you have posted so far and im interested in seeing where this is going, but if she's a teen assassin I feel you should be putting more about their jobs in because i feel it's more "teen romance drama" than "i'm a badass sixteen year old that could kill you in a second."

i really do like it though forreal.

Hahaha poor Cody is scared for his life...scratch that his teeth
I still think they would be a cute little thing
Zack is a cutie and I love how he flirts with Fae it makes me laugh
I liked how everyone was in this chapter
Ohhhh HUGO is gonna be replaced lol
Moree sooonn

EEK!!! Cody and Fae is gonna be so cute!
I cant wait to see what happens with them
Your right Star Wars never does get old
Yum fried fruit :D
More soon please?

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THEY CANT BE BROKEN UP THAT MAKES ME CRY INSIDE!
Ur stupid Brian ruins everything grr
Oh well, more soon?
p.s can i have a slice of the pizza it sounds good hehe

OMFG!!
I can NOT belive Alana and Bryan are together I can not picture that
Poor Zack :(
Oh well
!
More soon please?
I think it is cute btw that Fae met part of Leos family
BONDING TIME
lol

I think fae should have an open relationship or someone find them in a heated session or something lol

IDC THAT IT WAS LATE I LOVED EVERY WORD!
Lol so that was a really cute chapter
I am sooo happy that they are together now XD
Bad Bryan I wonder what hes got coming to him from Fae??
Ohhh sneeky sneeky Alana and Zack!!
Hehe more soon please?

WOOHOO UPDATE
That made me happy
I dont know who the Armando dude is but so far I like him
Hehe Bryan is stttttttttiiiiiiiiiilllllllllll doing pushups daaamn
Lol I like Leo...I think I have said that before
Poor poor Fae she is thinking to hard lol
More soooooonnnn

Yay! Thanks for the shout-out :)
So I love this chapter I found it funny that her sis ran and told Zack
Stilllll think they would be cute together just saying hehe
WOOOAAAHHH Bryan needs a chill pill lol
Hehe I feel bad that he has to count to a million for stupid Bryan...but its hilarious XD
Ahhhh Leo, so sweet and cute, I like his character :)
PLEASE update soon i will love you forever

OH MY GOSH I LOVED THEM
those chapters made me smile
i am glad her and her sister are friends now
Maybe Alana and Zack should get together that would be a cute couple XD
I adore that they kissed again lol
well more soon please and thankyou!

Eewie I dont like her sister :(
She seems bitchy and not fun at all
Hmph grr lol
Well I liked the new chapter :)
More soon please?

Sigh ok i was confused for a bit lol
I was like who is zack? then figured youd just thrown him in there or somthing
but now I know more lol
woot!
Loved them they are fantastic
ohhh sister drama i know what thats like
eek fae+leo ..... or fae+bryan .... or fae+zack
EEEKKK lol more soon

i love this!! by the way chapter seven and eight are the same chapters

OMG i cant believe I forgot to comment the first time i read this
Well I love the plot it is incredibly original and creative
I adore the way you made her act she is incredible and soooo freaking badass
Leo is a sweetheart and I really like him
Zack is cool, an ass somtimes, but cool.
I love the other guys as well they make me smile lmao
Cant wait for your next chapter!!!
(sorry if you are annoyed at how long this is hehe)

awwwh! i love Leo, too, now! hahaha you totally need pictures for them all! Leo just makes me think of an adorable emo-type guy! :D

I t SUCKS!!
Kidding cuz
^_^ lol, it was fun, alot better in the second chapter, she's not so much of a hardass(At least not in the unfun way^_^)
^_- In any case, yeah all that great stuff because I forgot what I was going to say....^_^