This was really cute. :) I just stumbled across it and decided to check it out. I think there was a bit of a delay longer than necessary for them to finally get together, but hey, I'm glad they finally did and there was a happy ending. :D ... It's been nearly ten years since you posted this, but I just wanted to leave feedback anyway. Haha. People like me are still finding your stuff, clearly. :D And enjoying it. You're a great writer and just wanted to let you know that, and maybe put a random smile on your face with this comment. :P I may also check out some of your other stuff since I really enjoyed this one. :)
awww this story makes me happy well not the brandon coming and hitting Raine but the part where Alex came to the rescue and beat Brandon's ass and then when Raine and Alex kissed their adorable together :)
So aside from Raine getting beat up by that dick fuck (sorry if anyone finds that offensive, I just feel the situation calls for it) Brandon (again), this had to be the best chapter by far. For three reasons 1)Alex and Raine kissed, like really kissed. 2) Brandon got the SHIT kicked out of him by the wonderful Alex and 3) Alex came to the rescue to save Raine!
I think there was a bit of a delay longer than necessary for them to finally get together, but hey, I'm glad they finally did and there was a happy ending. :D
... It's been nearly ten years since you posted this, but I just wanted to leave feedback anyway. Haha. People like me are still finding your stuff, clearly. :D And enjoying it. You're a great writer and just wanted to let you know that, and maybe put a random smile on your face with this comment. :P
I may also check out some of your other stuff since I really enjoyed this one. :)