January 22nd, 2011 at 04:59am
thist layout <333
now ive read the last chapter, but not the begnning
so im interested in knowing what is going on
Jezzie-belle, I like that nickname :)
his trial? what's his tral for I wonder...
she put her lawyer in the hospital? how?
okay, so he can't talk or anything, but she talks to him, and visits him everyday?
and she sings to him :) that's really sweet that she does that for him
she's fallen in love with him, by just seeing him lay there everyday?
I find that extreamally sweet :)
I like how the prologue was set two years later
time skips, I don't know, it's just a good way to mix a prologue and first chapter
dang, she must be there a lot. the judge knows who she is!
oh Henry shows her who is boss, good for him man!
haha best last line ever, "'I'm your worst case" xD haha
dang they call her Jezebel the Bitch, that's a little harsh, damn
I seriously love Henry's character already. He's completely confident in himself
and he is nice too. He wants to help Jezzie, not dread her
I also like Jezebel's character too. She's such a badass
but you can tell she also has ike a soft side to her
This is a really good story line, with very, very likeable characters
love it so far :D
I really like the banner for your story it's so awesome. I wish that I had one that was that beautiful. However, I'm not a big fan of the green color used, not cause it's hard to read, but just cause it's not a pleasent color to look at in my opinion that is.
I find Jezebel to be an interesting character. Her sassy attitude and humor give the story more power in my opinion. This is well written as well, I can see that you've put quite a bit of work into it. Everything flowed well, so that was good. Nice work with it!