Slave: The Fight to Save a Species - Comments

Since my contest was merely for summaries, I will be only reviewing your summary. Firstly, I like how your summary chooses to be mysterious. I don't know if the third person switches from the two character's point of view, if it does, then lovely. If not, I would suggest maybe sticking the summary to only the main character's point of view?

It is short and sweet, and although I haven't read the story, you leave the readers with that urge to want to get into it. I can't offer much feedback otherwise. (I apologize for this being so late!)

the guy in the character pic for adrien is wentworth miller, just thought i'd let you know ;)
he has the perfect eyes for his character....just an observation

Sequel! Sequel! either one on Lily when she is older or on Adrian and Carmella's child.

Yeah, I'm writing another, but I don't know if it's going to be a sequel or a different story... what do you think?

Thanks for the shout out! U so did not have to do that. I'm going to be sad when this story is over though. R u planing on writing another one?

omg! what a twist! I love it. and either kind of ending is fine with me. It's ur story, it will turn out great either way.

a cliffhanger!!!!!! Nooooo i want to know what happens! Must have next chapter!

This story is really amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter

cool story! i like it!