Yay!! You're back! I really love the twist you took there at the end. I'm so excited to read more of this. You're writing has definately improved, doll. Keep going! =D
So different from anything I've read. Your writing style paints such a clear picture. Plus, I genuinely love stories that use the band members in different places, Instead of just making them all "BFF'S" that go to the same high-school. Needless to say, the plot is amazingly unique. The second chapter was definitely spooky; I loved it. I'm so excited to see where this goes. Clearly, I'm a subscriber now :)
I really love the twist you took there at the end. I'm so excited to read more of this. You're writing has definately improved, doll. Keep going! =D