Okay..wow. Just, wow. Normally I don't read these kinds of stories. Hell, I don't even comment on stories I like. But WOW. This was just beautifully written. At the beginning I was thinking of how cliche this was going to be, but I was completely wrong. You are one of the best writers ever. The ending made me cry so much. I don't know what came over me. You are fantastic. Don't ever stop writing. Ah, you inspire me to start writing again. Just, wonderful. Bravo.
Alright. So first of all, wow. You're the best writer that I've ever come across. I'm not even over exaggerating. I've been reading Lights on the lake and the writing is so poetically written that it made me check your other stories, e.g-This one.
Oh boy am I glad I checked out your stuff! This story is so touching and the ending was very surprising, yet totally made me smile. Jerry even had me believing that Carter really was guilty and that her investigating was all in vain. The flashbacks gave a better meaning to the story and Carter is absolutely so loveable. I'm glad Gwenith didn't end up with Adam. But it was sad that he died. Even if he was a bit of a potato to go against her like that.
It gives me bloody hope that there are still nice guys out there like Carter. I need me a Carter. It would complete my whole world.
Also, I really don't know how you write so well. The structure is so beautiful. I do hope you continue writing for like EVER. It's like losing a piece of me when I finish a story. I kinda wanna read it over and over again and just pretend that I don't know the ending. (:
Even though you finished this story ages ago, I still wanna tell you that you're amazing. And the story's amazing. I love it so much. More than burgers, frankly. And I chuffing love burgers.
I just finished reading this. Thank you so much. I absolutely loved it. I didn't realize how good it was until the end. Wow. I just am at a loss for words. It wasn't the most intriguing story I've read, but the ending was so satisfying. I've read so many stories and my standards just keep on raising. You've managed to capture my interest all throughout so congratulations on that.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7469699/1/Letters_From_Cages ^ plagiarised by discoisdead on fanfiction. I was typing in the title of your story to look for it, and I came across this as the #2 search. Please, please be alerted of this. This regards you and other readers as well. I wish you the best. I abhor plagiarisers. They are pathetic excuses for humans.
i wanted to stop by and say hi and that i love your story. its amazing. i have really only found around two other stories that interest me this much, i mean sure i read a bunch of them but this has to be one of the best. :) well i just wanted to let you know that i love how you go from flashbacks to the present. XD well byeee lol
Ohhhhh WOOOOW! Sorry this is a bit late but I was finally able to read the ending and I'm so sad it's over but this was an amazing story!! I love the ending and I'm so glad I was able to read this so thanks so much for writing this beautiful story!
Honestly that was the best story i have read on mibba in a really long time. I read the whole thing non-stop, you had me crying by the time it was over :) It is a great story and you did a wonderful job writing it.
A bit belatedly, I admit, I discovered this story. I don't think I can express how it has kept me on edge ever since I started reading it (about three hours ago) to the very end (thirty minutes past midnight), but you have created a thrilling, compelling story with very lively characters and a truly entertaining mystery! Thank you, for giving me a wonderful read and a three-hours-and-thirty-minutes repose from a dull Sunday evening. It has been a pleasure.
Oh no. It's over. I can never believe when a story is over until three months pass and there's no update. It sucks but hey that's life. I really really really really (how many more?) love this story. I like all your stories but this one had everything I like in it. And gosh, you are such a tease with the whole mystery.
I'm going to really miss this. I'm such a sucker, I feel like crying haha.
I still can't understand how all of Mibba isn't reading this. They really are missing out.
I'm already excited for the next story, SOG. (Yeah, you're right. It doesn't work like LFC. Speaking of, I always get hungry. You know, KFC? haha..)
Back to topic, I'm curious. Wonder what it'll be about. :)
Aww darn. This was the only story I was reading on Mibba and now it's over. It was a nice ending though. :D It was sad but happy at the same time. Bittersweet, I guess. I loved it. ^-^
this story was absolutely AMAZING! i'm gutted that it is finished, but it was the perfect ending :D i love your writing and i'm going to check out your other stories, so i'm sure you'll hear from me soon.
I don't know how she stays so strong. I'd be peeing the second Jerrry or Nigel look at me. o.o
And I feel kinda bad for Adam. Urgh. I'm still trying to decide what he deserves. Not death, no. Not death. Please no. Please let it be Annabelle. That bitch needs to DIE.
You are fantastic. Don't ever stop writing. Ah, you inspire me to start writing again.
Just, wonderful. Bravo.