I actually cried at this chapter! I read the pre sequel and I spent all day reading this and I love it!! Please continue to write because it's just amazing
I really like the story, but I really am hating on Bree.(Thought you just said not to.) I know she left to control her thirst and get her revenge. Leaving was not the right thing to do it was stupid and selfish of her. Her leaving made me lose interest in the story. Not that it is not a good story because it is overall.
That is just my opinion. And I am not saying this to be a hater it is just the way I feel.
Three years gone! wow and I'm still here pining over this story xD Embry..........the poor thing =( I just love this story so much...............I almost cried for Em =) Update soon!<3
When Bartender = Gerard Butler, he's = the definition of sexiness! xD That little Irish boy eh....*whispers under breath* He's her singer?! Oopsy.....the secret's out =D Sorray Bridget, yes i know you can protect yourself, but agreeing to live with some random vampire bartender dude (even though he's sexier than Embry xD) without so much as a little hesitation? Naive trusting American =P Update soon!<3
Bree! It's been ages! I was starting to think you forgot about me =( Is this little boy going to be significant? At first I thought he was half-dead and she would have to turn him (it was too close to Carlisle's saving Edward) but then he's so young, he'd become an immortal child and that'd would be against vampire laws, though the Volturi can't very well do any to her xD A.W In some situations, I realize that you use 'till' where you should probably use 'to' Just an observation Update soon!<3
You've had me hooked since "I will love you forever". You have quite an imagination, it's impressive. Please update this story soon, even if you don't get the five comments you want :)
i just read the ENTIRE prequel and what you have so far in the sequel so i read silently...i do that alot... me is ADDICTED TO THIS STORY!!!!! pleeeease update soon!!! from what i see the comments before these are not so far back but sorta far back anyways... i neeeeeeeed another chapter really bad! i have a 4 day weekend and i finished my hw so me is gunna be bored! pleeeease update! (sorry for rambling!)