Sometimes All I Can Do Is Cry - Comments

Actually, I have no idea what's going to happen next. Yeah, I'm bad at guessing like that. I guess I'm really only ever creative when it comes to my stories.

Hmm, It's kind of interesting, having a kid want sex at what? Five?
I kinda compare it to me, and start thinking about... I dunno, actually, I just think.

But anyways, that was good :D
And I suppose the whole asking about what we think is supposed to lead up to some big shocker? Or was it just for the hell of it?

... Oh, and just as question I've decided to pull out of my ass: Like the Jonas Brothers? Or are they like "totally ewwies" (my sister says that she said that when she was a teenager) to you?

Gah, you update too fast. I can't keep up anymore. *sobs*

But wow, that was all...

Okay, I'm not going to repeat what I did up there, it was not only awkward, but it was pointless.

But seriously? That's like all... And holy shit.
(Gah, this isn't any help either...)

But wow. Dude, what if she actually can't walk?
You wouldn't be that mean, would you?
No, I didn't think you would.

Anyways, good job. It was - ehmm... Interesting.
Yeah, that works.

What? O, that. That's just the voice in my head. I usually refer to it as the little fucker in my head.

Gah. Some creepy lady called right when I was about to comment. She went on for like, 10 minutes. And there was all this static and shit, so I couldn't hear half the words she said, and ended up posing as my mother.
*shivers exaggeratedly* She's calling back.

Anyways, I forgot like, half the stuff that happened in there.
Buuut... Wow.
Just like, wow.
I'm nearly speechless.

That was all... Wow.

OMG SHE'S CALLING AGAIN.
Oh, nevermind.

Anyways, I wasn't done.

And all, yeeeaaahhh. Wow.

(Sorry, I'm pretty useless today...)

Dude, at the beginning of the chapter, I found myself wondering how old that kid was.

And wow. Just wow.Sex with a five year old. If that won't get the paps crazy, what will? Hahaha, no, I joke, I'm a tired idiot today.. So you'll just have to ignore me.

On another note, that was a random POV shift. It was quite entertaining, though :D

why dont you like? they're happy!

Why you no like??
(^Sugar...)
Is good :D

I'd tell you exactly why, but my nephew needs the computer...
(I always have an excuse :)

awww he's such a cute daddy! she knows condom and sex how old is she supposed to be?

Aww, cute :D
It's nice that she tells her everything... I probably couldn't. I'd start laughing at random moments O.o
Haha, shot gun. I'm amazed my parents have never metioned that.
I had something else to say, but then i forgot. My bad.

I'm loving it, update soon

No, it was after their little 'date'. He was talking to Nicole.

DUUDE, I WANT SNOW
Too bad everyone who lives here hates it. They're all retards. They're also afraid of the rain. Literally.
And here I am telling them that i love it :D

Yay!! Franki likes him now.
Don't ruin that. I like it.
Was he writing a letter or something. (Sorry, it's morning, I'm stupid right now...)

i liked the update...but i think they made up a little fast...o wells...i do that in all my stories :)

Yes, yes I do like it.
And Red Robin. <-- Just sayin.

So, does this mean they're getting back together, or are they gunna do a 180 and hate each other again?

No, I do not have any predictions.
I'd give you another command, but you would probably ignore it again.

But I did like the beginning of the chapter :D

Crappy? You're damn right!!
IT WAS TOO FRICKEN SAD.
Seriously, just have someone hit Zacky in the head. And then have him run to Col and Franki for protection :D
Now.

Wow good story I like. But what's with the time leap thing?? I was a bit confused as to what's happened since the end of the last chapter- has she not seen Zack since then? Update soon please!

I shoulda sent that command sooner...

Kay.. I guess you're no longer mean.. Sorta.
But -- I dont have predictions.
I have COMMANDS. And you have to follow them. (even though I cant really punch through a computer if you dont...)
They will get back together.. Kay??
...
Seriously, they have to.

You go from pretty babies all the way runny make up??\
...
You're mean.

Oooh, steeeamyy.
Can't say i didn't like it :D

And was that 'ride' like, a paying customer, or something? (That sounded so... umm, weird)

I'd continue, but my dad is harassing me, so I don't have the time...