White-Washed Lies - Comments

  • runawayFish

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    You're going to continue this.. Right? It is such an amazing story, written so well...
    January 11th, 2012 at 10:05am
  • ScatmanZombie

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    To be honest, good work. I definitely like the way you write. (I know thats a big help huh?) Kinda short paragraphs tho. I do enjoy how you seem to describe everything just enough to get a grasp of whats going on, but still little enough to keep my curiosity going.
    July 19th, 2011 at 02:17am
  • Reckless Revenge

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    I Love this story!Here ya go!*hands over virtual cookie*I'd give you a real cookie,but I ate that one...
    October 6th, 2010 at 09:04am
  • Nebulous.

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    This is amazing :]
    September 16th, 2010 at 11:29pm
  • JamesCassells

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    Greatly writen story so far.
    September 16th, 2010 at 03:00pm
  • Asswipes

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    I completely love this story.
    The way you write is intriging,
    and just makes it that much more interesting.
    Please update soon. :)
    May 17th, 2010 at 06:23am