Before I start this comment I have to admit, this is my first Draco/Harry story that I've read properly. I normally shy away from anything Harry Potter related, because in my experience they're not what I expect them to be
Saying all that however, something about this story attracted me to it and I decided to give it a shot. And I'm very glad that I did.
The layout is gorgeous, I must say and even though it is only six chapters in It fits well with the story. Your characters are portrayed very well. I like how you've changed Draco, although maybe changed isn't the right word, it's more of an explored. You've explored Draco more than had ever been done before and I liked that, he was very much a mysterious character before. I like that you've put your own thoughts into that. I think you've also kept Harry very accurate and that's nice to see as well.
Your plot is very thought out and I like the idea of Draco being an artist, like a muggle job for almost the most unmuggle person. That's the way I see it anyway. I also like how distant you've made Draco and Harry, it's very real and you've not got them becoming best friends in the first few chapters. And how Draco is interested in Harry and Ginny's relationship and first knew they were engaged, didn't know they had been married and divorced and had a kid, again very real.
He tried to ignore the little book that was taunting him with a worn look. That had to be my favourite line so far, you're very good with your imagery and symbolism and I think it's one of the reasons I was so hooked until I finished what you had done so far. You have an interesting writing style and apart from a few minor typos it was perfectly written.
I thought you deserved more comments then you have so far and I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed reading this. I'm subscribed and I very much look forward to more. =]
aahhhhhh, my fav HP pairing, other than the next generation Albus/Scorpius. CONTINUE THIS!!!!! it's really good so far! and read mine? http://stories.mibba.com/read/221587/Diaries-of-a-Troubled-Magician-A-S-Potter/