Expecto Patronum - Comments

That was so sweet! I can imagine Teddy wanting to know more about his father, and the fact that Remus taught Harry how to do it and then Harry's teaching Teddy is adorable.

great story!! the entire time i was thinking "any happy little thought?"

great story! you've got a good chance of winning in my competition (:

bloody... flippen... brilliant

it was a bit difficult to read, but that doesn't matter. the writing does, and it was overall very good!

um, OK? I can read it just fine

You need to change the layout. It's really annoying to have to highlight the text to be able to read it.