Swing Into My Heart - Comments

Hahaha, to say the least this is very unexpected. I opened this up for a laugh, and it's definitely what I got. So please, humour me and continue updating, cause I'm quite fond of this :P

Uhh, Bert, You just had to screw things up.
Frank and Gerard are beyond cute in this.
Me likey.
Update very soon!

That was funny.

*shakes fist* Berrrrt -____-
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This is beyond cute. I love the 'George of the Jungle' theme going on here. I adore this. Write more, soon!

teehee, this makes me smile so much, update again soon ;) xo

Aw, I smiled so wide when I saw the update!
And ohmygod, Frank is soso cute!
I had to laugh a few times at this chapter, like the but part.
I hope it won't take too long next time. lol.
xoxo.

Sooooo.
I really like this one too ^^

Hi :P
Funny idea lol.
This is cute.

This is perhaps one of the most geniues ideas I have ever seen. Who wouldn't just love to read a Tarzan fic?!
This is awesome! And Frank makes a really cute Tarzan.

I love this! It's amazingly cute!
I love how innocent Frank is but at the same time, he's not....
Frank would make a cute Tarzan :D

This is soooo cute.
And Frank is adorable in this story.
I love it.
He reminds me of a little kid hyped up on skittles.
Wait, isn't that how he usually acts?
Anywhooo, update soon, please?

Aww it made me laugh how Frankie and Gee bickered *laughs*
They're so cute together

More soon please?

how completely adorable! and now all we need is for Bert to go away so frank and gerard can live happily ever after =D

I'd kick berts ass

I really do love this.
Bob and Ray as non-humans is an amzing idea, but is surprisingly super hard to picture in my head.
I ended up with the animals they are, but with Ray or Bob hair. It was actually really nice....In my head.
And I also pretty much fell in love with this when Frank said his view was much better. (Or someting along those lines.)
That's so cliche...but in the best way possible!
(Wait...how could it be cliche?! This is anything but!)
Strike that first part two sentences ago. :)
I'm soooooo excited for future updates, because I know this story is going somewhere, with how great it is already.
Update soon, pweeeeeeeze????
[$@$] <-- Dollar bill.

Oh man, I love this and you know it.
I love how Frank is really happy, although he seems to not know the deffinition of happiness.
I totally think you should expand on Frank's semi knowledge of human speech.
And damn, you stumped me on the snail elephant thing.
But Frank and Gee dancing made me smile.
I love this.

Yayyy, it immediately reminded me of An arrow t.m.c.. the unforgetable green layout! XD It seems like another good story from you! Definitely subscribing...

I was kind-of subconciously waiting for something like this. Some other good-non-making-all-that-much-fun-of-spoof-which-is-just-a-very-general-term. (That is a load of -'s)... But nah, it's good. I like it, and I can't wait to see where it goes. =D

First of all, I would like to say that I really like the layout. :)
It really fits the story!
And now, to actually go into how I feel about the story (well, the first chapter)…

Frank as Tarzan … I love it. I'm so glad that you made Frank “Tarzan” instead of Gerard. I just think that it works better that way. And besides, then you might have to make Mikey an ‘ape’ as well and what fun would that be? You're only supposed to have one monkey man! =P
I think that having the Way brothers as the normal human beings raised in an average civilization is so much better. I give you mad props. :)
I like how Frank refers to the leaves and trees like he would a person, saying that he would get them back and such. XD
*Thinks of Frank dancing the best that he could in a loin cloth while in a tree*
Wow… that’s hilarious! And so adorably cute as well. :D
I loved how Frank referred to Gerard as an ‘odd looking ape’.
I'm glad that you didn’t make Frank and Gerard kiss when Frank got closer to them. That would’ve been so … blah? Ha, ha. I could totally imagine Frank trying to touch Mikey’s glasses and Mikey having a mini episode of some sort. That would be marvelous to see in real life, with Frank with extra long hair and in nothing but a cloth, of course. ;)
I should just stop before I drool all over myself.
I'm going to take a wild guess and say that the spinning black rock, snail thing was a record player with a record…? Ha. I kept thinking, “What the hell is she describing?” When I got to the part about him touching it and it screeching like a mouse, I finally made the connection (duh!). I felt stupid, especially when I went “Ohhh!” and started laughing at the screen. I have quite a few blonde moments in my life even though I'm a natural brunette. XD
Hehe, Mikey calling Frank ‘it’ was just priceless! It seems to me like Mikey will be the one most likely to pass out while Gerard will get to know Frank on some sort of level. Or maybe, just maybe, Gerard passes out and Mikey doesn’t know what to do and then Frank takes Gerard back to his ‘tree house’ (I'm assuming he lives in one XD) and Mikey goes on a quest to find Gerard.
I'm gonna shut up now. =)
All in all, I really enjoyed the first chapter and can't wait to see what you have planned for this!
I love it already; it seems really cool and just overall, completely interesting.
I look forward to reading more!
♥
(I found out how to make hearts! Again, blonde moment. Hehe.)