Forbidden Sins - Comments

I just wish Duncan would fall for her already....haha :) Loved the update :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

Awwww.....those updates are so cute :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P Screw the rules.....I say that have a relationship...hehe :) I love this story :) :D :P

Fin and Audra are just too adorable. They are my favorite characters :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P It's so cute that Audra and Lauren love each other. Stupid rules. pfft......Now Duncan just has to fall in love witn Fin ^.^ hehe :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P Love it bunches :) :D :P

Loved the freakin update!!! I nearly ran around the world when I saw 5 new chapters were up :D

Love these updates :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P Keep it up por favor :) :D :P

I can seriously see Duncan and Fin getting together. To heck with the rules or whatever ;) haha loved it :) :) :) :D :D :D: P :P :P

-cough- I am going to marry Zacky and have his babies.

Anyways... thanks for the comments and love guys <3

loved it....
as much as fin is cute and bubbly and duncan is a sex god! i would have to say that i like the Lauren and Audra chapters just a little bit better :)
maybe im slightly biased to Zacky Vengeance though....

love it love it !

Love it, love it, love it :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P Audra is so cute I love her :) :D :P

oh shit is about to hit the fan!
oh well, duncan can take him, just as long as fin doesn't get hurt by getting caught up in the middle of the fight......

haa haa, go lauren man! keep fixing those broken things!

Best.Vampire.story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for you to update!!! I love Duncan :D Please update!!!

Okay, so I got an e-mail saying that this story was updated and I come to see that 6 new chapters were up???? What the heck?? Oh, well I don't care. I loved them all :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P My favorite so far is Fin and Duncan haha :) :D :P

ohhh new update....!!!! duncan's probably right though, i don't think fin got any of what he said lol

wow, i read both kings of war and this story..and i've got to say, i don't think i've ever imagined zacky v. as a slave lol!!!

i love your guys' stories.... =) update again real soon....on both of them!

please continue! i loved it! ur an awsome writer :3D

WoW! really really really good, i know that the story just started but the story line is very unique, and different from all the other vampire, human slave stories which only have to do with sex *eye*roll*, and beating. you should keep writing. And i think that it is awesome how diff people are writing the vampire and human povs. hope you stick to this story till the end cuz i know that i will be reading till it is finished.

I just found this story and I love it. I love the plotline, and I serioulsy can't wait for more. I'm really interested in this too. :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

Man this is awesome! :) Hope you update soon.