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this story is awesome :)update soon!!!

OMIGOSH YES!!! LMFAO THAT WAS HILARIOUS update soon xoxoxooxo

FABULOUS!

i just started reading this and I absolutely LOVE it. It's sooo funny, and really well-written. Cannot wait for the next update :)

Love it it's great cant wait for the next update!
xoxo Burned

Love it it's great cant wait for the next update!
xoxo Burned

Oh... Tasha wants him- and she secretly loved Jared flashing her (in my head). But anyway... Loved the chapter, glad Jared didn't get raped by a horny hobo, and "That's my danger zone!" is my new favorite quote...

DIED Laughing at the end! that was awesome!!!

dfjghsemhtseghuiv THIS WAS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER! "I love this song!" Hahaha. Oh I am proud to be your friend.

LOLOL omg. Best chapter ever.

Baahahahahahahaahahah omg I can't wait to see what they do to him!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) Loved the return :) :) :) :D:D:D:P:P:P

yaaaay!! new story from you.. :) love the line about blue balls!! lol! you really got me hooked up with this, and you made me late for class just cause i couldn't stop reading!! :))

I'm secretly a sex god.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEST LINE EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it ;) :) :) :D:D:D:P:P:P

I really do like Tasha, but the next sentence doesn't show it. I was happy that the shallow bitch finally shows her vulnerable and sweet side.
I always had feeling Jared wasn't so innocent, cause being a sex god doesn't make innocnet and pure ;) hahahaa.
As much as like Jared and Tasha,
I like them even better together.

Awwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was precious!!!!!!!! It was such a major awww moment!!!!!!!!!!! & i knew that the other Jared was a creeper!!!!!!!! haha ;) :D : P Loved it :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

Yay!!
Another update! My prayers have been answered!
XD

Dude. You're too good.
I thought the creeper/ almost-rapist would've had her for sure!
But, as always, you twist things so I have no fucking clue what might happen next.
Although, when I do guess right, I feel that much better >:]
XD
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I love how Jared was willing to go get her at that time of morning and save his little -LOVER- friend.
We need more guys like that in this world ;)

Dude. First off, it sucks that you aren't getting as many comments. :(
I mean, you used to be effing QUEEN of getting like 4788489 comments...
Maybe it's because you haven't written any sex chapters XD
But seriously, what the hell, readers? Show Shelby some love!

-Ahem-
Back to commenting.
Ch.8
DUDE. XD
A talk show? Really?
That must be annoying. I hate when fans, paparazzi, etc go start rumors because they can. So not cool.
But, nice update. Me love somes funneh talk show.
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XD

Ch. 9

Oh lordy...

oh crap:

"I'm going to get laid."

Yep. Because that's exactly what people do when they're bored and have nothing else to do.
...Actually, in your world, Shelby it IS what they do.
XD
Okay, I spoke too soon. You did write a sex chapter. Holy hell, you porn writer!
My virgin eyes are bleeding! lmfao
Not really.
You've written worse. And by worse, I mean better.
...thatmakesmesoundlikeawhoretoo
XD
But GNENFGOEI!! Dude. This guy is like a machine! Wtf? He needs to lay off. Literally!
Post soon, yeah? :D

ohh god is tasha bout to get raped

Wooooh. Oh my gosh. Oh the irony. Hahaha I love it ;) :) :) :D :D :D: P :P :P

Hahahaha I love it :) But......how can Tasha love him as a brother??? Hello, he likes you. Go get him tiger :) tehe :) I love this :) :D :P :) :D :P :) :D: P