I Love You More Than I Love Being A Star - Comments

  • iamFINE

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    I really liked this. It was great as a one-shot, but I get the feeling that if you want this to be a story with chapters and whatnot, you may want to back up. Go to a bit longer before Finn kissed Kurt, you know?

    But if you do decide to make a Finn/Kurt story, you've gotta tell me. I love that pairing =p
    <3 Manda
    February 3rd, 2010 at 06:49pm
  • broseph

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    This is really good. (:
    Please keep writing. <3
    January 27th, 2010 at 02:18pm
  • tendo choi

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    I think the song's really appropriate for them, and I like the story, but the end seemed a little rushed. I think you should try expanding on Finn's realization that he's gay a little more. It would be great if you could convey the confusion that he must be feeling from the kiss etc.
    (Y)
    January 26th, 2010 at 11:01pm
  • rawryourself

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    I really like this. It's good so far :) The title is a litttle iffy, though.
    January 26th, 2010 at 04:23am