I really liked this. It was great as a one-shot, but I get the feeling that if you want this to be a story with chapters and whatnot, you may want to back up. Go to a bit longer before Finn kissed Kurt, you know?
But if you do decide to make a Finn/Kurt story, you've gotta tell me. I love that pairing =p <3 Manda
I think the song's really appropriate for them, and I like the story, but the end seemed a little rushed. I think you should try expanding on Finn's realization that he's gay a little more. It would be great if you could convey the confusion that he must be feeling from the kiss etc. (Y)
But if you do decide to make a Finn/Kurt story, you've gotta tell me. I love that pairing =p
<3 Manda