It's such weird thing that I absolutely love this story. I'm not a fan of the Jonas Brothers or Fan-Fictions, but this was so creative and well written that I had no choice but to love it! I know it's been a year, but if you update this, I would freak. <3
This is the one question I have: Why couldn't the ex-wife watch the kids? I understand that they're now divorced, but they didn't divorce their children as well. I'm not a Greenday fan, so I don't know if you're tying in something that actually happened in real life or not. I think that without that key detail, (not knowing why the mother isn't around), the story is kind of at a halt, for me personally. Perhaps you explain it in later chapters, however. I only read up to chapter three.
Everything happens pretty quickly, sort of like miniature time jumps. I also found that it wasn't too detailed, either. Maybe if you take the time to detail some things, and try not to rush the storyline a bit, it'll be a better read.
However, not being a fan of both bands, I think your main focal point is cute. And I've got to admit, the title fits in well with the plot; who would've thought, a Greenday/Jonas fanfiction? Originality kudo points for that. =)
I don't like the Jonas Brothers, at all, but I love this story! She should choose Billie Joe... And I love that Joey and Jakob are in the story! You never see stories where Billie's kids are included, which disappoints me because I love Joey! :) Okay, please continue :D
OMG just kiss him already! and stop trying to pretend u dont want to we all know u do! It was cute tho! :D More soon!!! I like this one it's fun. Mustard yay! :D
Dangit!!! Kiss already!!! Joe get out of the picture!!! I bet next chapter joe is gonna be in it... maybe they bump into the jonas family while they are checking out the reptiles xD oooooooo maybe... Update soon!!! Didnt no what to really comment about... sorri!!!
Omg!!! Sorry for late comment!!! My phone has been a bitch to use xD When will they just admit to each other that they like each otha... pain... joe os sweet :) but idk... me like billie :P Update soooonnnn... Promise next time i comment it will be better x.x dont have much time to comment right now.
This is a good story so far. I love how Billie Joe wants her to admit that she has feelings for him. He's so arrogant... I love it. update it please!!!
The problem with his fan base being kids is those kids will grow up and get over it and he'll get older and won't appeal to the new kids. There will always be some fans but he'll lose more and more. It was a good chapter tho, it sounded like a fun date...if it had been a different show maybe ;) Just stick with Billie, he's amazing! :D