I'm Your Biggest Fan... - Comments

LOL yay i get to play strip poker with patrick!

good update, but seriously before you post go back and re-read to ensure you are using correct spelling and that it makes sense, other than that i liked it, Star is awesome

it is pretty good so far

but I agree with LakeEffectKid just go back and edit, maybe do a spell check.

Well, I like it, I might even adore it, but you should use a spell checker, and edit it a bit maybe. Some of the words were hard to understand because they weren't spelled right, and if it's hard to understand chances are, some people won't read it. Also, not that it's a bad thing, but it's a bit unrealistic.

It's really not a bad story, but those are just the things I noticed. Your vocabulary is more than exceptional, too.

How lame am I ? I am posting my own first comment, Anywho people this is a good story you should read it.