How to Kill a Princess - Comments

Thanks for entering my contest.

I really enjoyed reading this, it's not like other incest stories I have read. One little thing though, you crammed a little bit too much for a one-shot, perhaps it would have been better as a two-shot?
Despite that, I enjoyed it.

Thanks for your entry. I enjoyed reading it. I love how you used the castle... i will let everyone know the winners after i have read all the entries. thank you for participating..

You had entered this into my Femmeslash and Slash contest;

And that was actually really, really good. My reason for surprise is because the incest; I despise incest. But, that was a really good story. There was only mistake I could detect was this;

In Taylor's case, he only pretended to like her, Maxie had had another girlfriend the whole time he was with Taylor, which were exactly a month and a half..

Instead of which were exactly a month and a half, it should've been which was. But, I make that same mistake all the time, so I'm not trying to be rude or mean, just state a fact and try to help you. But, this was still a really good story, despite your one small mistake.

=) Absolutely amazing, my dearrie.

Also, I'm very happy to have the first comment. ^_^