Gone Awry - Comments

Im chapter 60, you put "an Limousine". Pardon, if I'm being rude, but it should be "a limousine."
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Thank you so much for a sequel! please, can you friend me on facebook? It would be so much more convinient for me. I wouldlike you to send me any and all information on the art and banners I promised you in trade for the sequel i demanded. Which, btw, i am soooo syked about! THANK YOU! my face book is Jessica Stephanie Gibson. My profile pic is in blue and holding up a rock. All info would be best recieved there. other wise, you can contact me through mibba.

So...I just caught up. I'd been 49 chapters behind and started to continue them yesterday.

I'm kind of shocked at all that's happened, but here I go about to read what you have of Gone Twisted XD

Make a seguel! Please oh please oh pleas make a sequel! I will love you forever and ever if you will only write a sequel! I will be your slave ! I will draw story art and make banners and shower you with praise if you will only make a sequel! No really. I've bee told I am an amazing artist and I really will do art for the story for you. But only if I can have a sequel. So just, please?

I know this story probably ended ages ago, I'm not quite sure - however I just wanted to put my two cents in it.

When I started reading this you had 109 chapters. That almost dettered me from reading it, But I decided to give it one chance and read the first three chapters. I think you can tell the rest. I read atleast twenty chapters a night to catch up, and when I ended, I just about fainted. It was a clever little cliffhanger/end. One where most things happen and still leaves the reader hanging out.

However, the story was a bit prolonged, maybe exaggerated in the wrong places? I'm not quite sure. But I still loved it.

Also, you may need to watch your spelling of the word 'off'. I noticed you usually spelt it 'of'.

In conclusion, an amazing story and I cannot wait to read the sequal! (:

you left me on a HUGE cliffhanger, i'd deff want you to write more!

Dude, I love this. But some advice? Watch when you type "your" because some of the time you're looking for "you're". And cloths isn't clothes, you forget the e. But other then that, I absolutely freaking love this story.<3<3<3

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I LOVED IT. But leaving Ash there is mean. It just can't end yet... I'm looking forward to the sequel! >:D

man....i LOVED it.......you have to write a sequel about what happens.....sorry i haven't been able to comment, i'm in "college" and i haven't had time.

pls pls pls do a sequel it can't end there

You definitely should write a sequel. And I agree with everything 'calling all creeps.' wrote. Couldn't have typed it better myself. (:

Ending it the way you did was clever, where it was written in first person & ended it with 'and this is my story'. I never expected that. Still, clever as it is, I have to agree with the others on a sequel. It simply cannot end with such a drop off. I'd personally like to see her become a death eater and be forced to face her family and yaddayaddainnerconflicts, but you're clever. I'm sure you'll surprise us all if you write a sequel. I don't want to sound rude after praising your skills, but I'd highly recommend getting someone to proof-read your work before submitting chapters. & if you already have someone doing so, I suggest finding a new beta reader. Other than that, I'd give it 10/10. This is one of the few stories I've found worth subscribing to lately and I truly hope you continue writing on it.

YOU.HAVE.TO.WRITE.A.SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!

This story was awesome !
I read it all in just a few days :D
Ash is an really intresting character too.
I thiiink you should do a sequel ! I want to know what happens to Ash, and how she escapes .. or if Draco will somehow free her .. because of guilt maybe ? If he could feel that.
And I wanna know what happens with her and Blaise, and Tracy.
So many reason for you to do a sequel !
DO IT PLEASE :D

<3 xxxxxxxxx

OH MY GOSH, I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND YES, YOU MOST DEFINITELY NEED A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =)

oh yea one more thing....Ash and Blaise cant end this way!! they have to end up together!!! so at least for that reason you have to write a sequel!!!

I loved the story!!! you HAVE TO do a sequel!!! please please please please PLEASEEEEE??!!!!

this story was AMAZINGGG and the ending was so good.<3 You need to do a Sequel!

jesus bloody hell, that was the best ending ever! DEMAND A SEQUAL! honestly i loved it

I think you definately should make a sequel! And that size sounds perfect! This story was ridiculously long, though it's definately worth the read.

I shall be very sad if you just leave the story as it ended. I think it should be continued.

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