And yet Roses and Apologies Can't Fix Everything - Comments

This doesn't really have to do with the story, but in the summary, you have a typo- Gabe's last name is "Saporta", and you had "Sporta". Not that it matters, I just thought I'd point it out.

The first time I read this it was kind of confusing, to be honest, but then when I reread it it was fine. This was interesting, and you did a good job. :]

It's great, though I felt like it didn't really tell any message than them breaking up and her dating Gabe as revenge..
Anyways, you did a good job telling it. :]
I'll inform you when I have announced the winners.
Good luck! :)

OMG! Gabe!!!! This is awesome! =)

though*

Awe that was sad. :(
loved it tho.

Awwwww i loved it =) You did a good job