June 9th, 2011 at 08:30pm
It's great, though I felt like it didn't really tell any message than them breaking up and her dating Gabe as revenge..
Anyways, you did a good job telling it. :]
I'll inform you when I have announced the winners.
Good luck! :)
The first time I read this it was kind of confusing, to be honest, but then when I reread it it was fine. This was interesting, and you did a good job. :]