Color Me Perfect - Comments

yes yes, a thousand times yes, I've already commented on the other story..I so can't wait

I definitely think it's worth considering.
And then doing.
And then me loving.

Thanks for writing this!
It has turned out to be one of my favorite stories on Mibba.

awww, cute :)
yeah, sounds good to me. :)
he does deserve to be happy too. poor thing, but i'm glad that he was there. :)

Awww, that was sooo amazing. :) I'm definitely going to miss them but they deserve to relax and just be happy :)
They're soon cute, and just seeing everything from Zhyler's point of view just makes everything soo much better. :) They're soo amazing :D
and he's right. That's all that really matters :) Awww :)

goosebumps when I read the ending of this story, I'm so gonna miss it, but I'm so happy that it has a very happy ending, and happy birthday story...this story was truly a wonder a to read, it made you actually use your imagination to see the story come to live, and that is what I love about reading, you get to become a part of the world you are reading about, you missy captured this wonderfully, I really did feel like I was in his world and watching him being colored perfectly.

That was adorable. :)
I really do love the way the emotion flows out of every word. You make it seem so simple. :)
I'm so glad that they're happy. :) They definitely deserve it. :)
i don't have too much trouble telling the difference. Kayden is normally more cryptic, whereas Zhyler is usually pretty mysterious... but it's different.. wow.. I'm going to stop before I start making any less sense than normal. :)
Lovely. I'll definitely miss them :)

honestly? I do have troubles telling the POVs apart...
I loove this, though :D
update soon, yeah?

Awwww....it's almost over -cries-

I so jumped up and down in my seat when I seen this was updated but now I'm sad it is over(well almost) :( but I have so loved this story and I could tell the differences usually with after the first words or so I could tell, but I so loved this and will be bittersweet to read the end

i can :]
it took a little bit of training and reading the whole thing a few times through
but i got it :]

I'm just so happy that they're together.
Clearly, thats where they belong.
I'm sad that the story is ending.
It's really amazing though.

I can tell the difference :)
They kinda have a different way of thinking.
It's subtle. You gotta look for it. But I can tell.

Page claim.! :D

i love it <3 :)

Your writing and this last chapter were both absolutely amazing. I love this story so much. Absolutely will always be one of my favorites. So much emotion in every line. Amazing work.

This is amazing!
That last chapter honestly made me want to cry. It was so full of emotion that it literally jumped off the screen into you.
Once again, I absolutely love how you're writing this story.
Can't wait for the next update =)

No! That chapter was absolutely beautiful. Don't feel bad about that at all. It was amazing, and I love it.
Awww, Zhyler loves him. :D!!! AWWW!!!!!
Okay, I'm seriously crying because of how beautiful that was. I love this soo soo much. :D! Wonderful.

gahhhhhhhhhhh
i love this(:

This was not shit, it was fucking amazing, even with the way most describe sex(or implied sex) in a scene, you done it so much better, with the words you use, made my mind work overtime just to picture it, and I loved every little bit of the little movie in my head

*sorry for the long comment*

Awh! Thank god for BOTDF for inspiration!
Thank god for Zhyler breaking his duche-iness!

ohmy. so damn confusing. but so good.

i love this story. tis great.
uppdattee soooon.

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