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  • crescendo.

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    this story is so confusing, but i love it.
    i think the style of what you write is fantastic.
    i cant wait for more.
    update soon.
    July 1st, 2010 at 06:09am
  • AshlynnLyrix

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    wow, I've missed this..I loved it
    June 25th, 2010 at 05:58pm
  • SmallWonders

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    Wow. I just finished chapter 31.... you really know how to write, hun. This is brilliant. Honestly, with a little tweeks here and there, you could publish this without trouble. Excellent use of intellect and knowledge. :D
    June 24th, 2010 at 04:51pm
  • SmallWonders

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    I've only read up to chapter 7, but this is BRILLIANT. I've never read anything more perfectly and well written. This is awesome.
    June 24th, 2010 at 02:56am
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    oh my goodness. That was heartbreaking.
    Poor thing. What's happening. they're all so sad.
    June 23rd, 2010 at 11:36pm
  • Miyral

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    We're all a little selfish sometimes. I never thought I'd see Blane's color change. He's always been our constant calm blue. Things are really starting to get stirred up. Wonder what their next moves will be. Hope to find out soon! <3
    June 23rd, 2010 at 09:47pm
  • theorychicken

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    Poor Kayden =(
    He seems so confused...
    And what is he gonna do about Blaine? And Zhyler?
    This story is wonderful....can't wait until you update again =)
    June 23rd, 2010 at 09:43pm
  • Accio All Time Low!

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    ohmygosh!
    this is soo amazing :DDD
    June 23rd, 2010 at 09:42pm
  • Accio All Time Low!

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    ohmygosh!
    this is soo amazing :DDD
    June 23rd, 2010 at 09:42pm
  • deanlove13'

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    This story right here is AWESOME!
    and i have read alot of stories
    it's really addicting
    keep going.
    :)
    June 18th, 2010 at 07:56am
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    oh goodness!!! What happened??? Zhyler sounds...well broken.
    I missed this, it's so beautiful.
    Happy Birthday!! XD!!
    June 18th, 2010 at 06:52am
  • Miyral

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    Oh no. What's happened to Zhyler? I don't like seeing him like that. I really hope they're able to fix things between them. They're not doing too well with out each other. It really makes me sad to see them this way. Definitely still in love with this story. It feels so good to be reading it again, I had really missed it. Thanks so much for the update. Hope to be reading more soon, and happy birthday! <3
    June 18th, 2010 at 05:12am
  • Accio All Time Low!

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    fantastic
    June 18th, 2010 at 05:03am
  • Miyral

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    Please update soon! I really miss reading this story. Hope you can find the time and inspiration to give us an update. <3
    June 14th, 2010 at 08:44pm
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    Wow! I just started reading this today, and I have to say that it is probably one of the most amazing stories that I have ever read. There really isn't a lot of discription but the emotions behind every word is so powerful that there are times when I'm on the verge of tears.
    I don't particularly think that it's too confusing to be honest. The colors makes completely sense, and Kayden's attitudes align with what it seems like you're trying to get across.
    I don't really know what to think when it comes to Blaine, but I understand why Kayden would find him safe and Zhyler confusing. Zhyler is a mess of emotions and intentions; Blaine is just willing to be there.
    Just a question, did you mean for their names to coorespond to their personalities?
    May 25th, 2010 at 08:34pm
  • meltyourheadaches

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    With every chapter, I'm reminded why I love this story. Every chapter the emotions just pull me in. It is confusing but I think it's in a good way. XD As always, can't wait for more. XD
    May 19th, 2010 at 09:01pm
  • Laughing.Disorder

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    As always, your chapters are breathtaking (:
    May 16th, 2010 at 12:30am
  • theorychicken

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    Once again, you're wonderful writing skills have amazed me. lol This story is so hopelessly confusing...but in a good way. =) I can't wait for the next update!
    May 10th, 2010 at 04:08pm
  • understand

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    ahhhh i luv this story! im just a little bit confuzed on if this is taking place over months, hours, days, and where blaine is in all this because i luv him more than zyler but i know i dont have a say in who kayden chooses (even though i wish i did) buy anyway this story is ah-mazing and i cant wait for an update :D
    May 9th, 2010 at 08:41pm
  • AshlynnLyrix

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    Loved it, amazing..I had to read it twice for it to finally sink in, but now that it is I understand it
    May 9th, 2010 at 07:14pm