Surprises All Around - Comments

i really do love this!!!!! update please!?!?!?!??!!
XD

i loved this story! xD
hopefully there will be more, yea? :)

It's really good, I'd love it if you wrote more. But I know what it's like when you get tired of a story, I have like honeslty 67 stories, most of them aren't finished and never will be.

this story makes me smile at the fact that my name is Hayley. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'd really really love it if there was an update some time soon : )

I still love the story, but does Haley need to swear that much? like sometimes is seems really harsh as compared to like playfull, unless it's supposed to be like that, in which case I say carry on. :P

But I can't wait to read more.

It's really good, the only problem I have it the grammar/spelling sometimes, but it's an awesome story.

I love this :D

I love this :D