Can't You See? - Comments

  • ignite this angel.

    ignite this angel. (100)

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    Aww, that was good :D
    I imagined it between like, a girlfriend/boyfriend, but I like this way a lot better.
    I think I came too late to see the pic in the layout. My bad...

    A lot of the time with these types of things, I've found that people are writing about someone complaining about their life, and personally, I like it better when they're not.
    Despite the fact that I complain a lot.

    I loved the first paragraph. If only I could do that with a blank piece of paper.
    Overall, great job. You did a good job of making a stroy out of a mere 6 words, personalized it, and you did a hell of a lot more descriptions than I could have.
    January 29th, 2010 at 04:51pm