Easily the best piece I've read today. Beautiful use of details and imagery which constantly gets over looked. "It was an island’s burp, a tiny rise in the land" is a great line, but when I thought about it the island is the burp so the burp belongs to the Earth. Changing it to Earth's burp might be more accurate.
I saw a few other things in there a little like that one. If you want to hear what I have to say just drop me a line.... or hell tell me to shut up if that's what you want to do.
"It was an island’s burp, a tiny rise in the land" is a great line, but when I thought about it the island is the burp so the burp belongs to the Earth. Changing it to Earth's burp might be more accurate.
I saw a few other things in there a little like that one. If you want to hear what I have to say just drop me a line.... or hell tell me to shut up if that's what you want to do.