What My Father Doesn't Know - Comments

I love the descriptions for this story. You really have a talent for this type of story. It gives off the vibe that it's taken place quite a while back, however. I was wondering if that was intentional or not? I also would like to comment on how well you begin the story, and how excellent it flows into her memories.

Good job!

You're a great writer! I'm waiting for more :D

holy shitt!
You're such a good writer..it's kinda unbelievable!
lol
:)
pleeeeaaaaaaasssseeee update sooon! or the suspense of waiting may just kill me o_O

I really like this story, please up date it. You have a way with words, it's a talent. Keep it up.

This is a great story!
You're an amazing writter.
Please update sooonnn!!!!

This is absolutely a beautiful story. You have such a way with describing--amazing. I'm already beginning to love Ada's character just from the Prologue and first chapter. Fantastic.

wow this story is the best storrie i have ever read and it is well worth reading i cant wait until this incrediblely great story is done i cant wait to read the whole story its going to be awesome and ur writing is going to take u far and i would tell any one who see this story to read it it is writen so good and u feel like ur sitting in the story so thanx for writing this trully great story its coming out so well im proud i love you

this is so well-written!!

I really really like this story. It's beautifully written, especially when BJ goes into fairytale mode about how him and Adrienne met.

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Thank you!
Chapter 1 has been added :]

i love it =]

update!!!!

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