Hourglass - Comments

Brilliant! :) Very awesome and creative, too! :) I like it.
Keep up your super-neat, very cool and super-extraordinary writing! :)

I think everybody pretty much covered how amazing a writer & how beautiful this story was for me XD Excellent epilogue..Very moving.

You win.

That was one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. I love reading stuff you write because it flows so well. You...gah.

You pwn. There, that's better than win.

Woah
Oh my god, Hannah, this is my new favorite chapter.
You officially win at life. Seriously.

The description in this is too amazing for words, and I love the way you leave things vague in the end, but not in a lazy way, like a lot of authors do. You leave them vague in a mysterious, well-done way, and I love it.

So much.

Amazing job.

I'm going to miss Nat. This story is so sad. I love your immaculate talent for capturing imagery in words. You're so talented.

I loved the ending to your story! I loved the whole thing!
You're such a good writer. You make perfect descriptions of everything and add in so much detail. But the last chapter is certainly my favourite.

Wow. That's all I can really say. Wow...

Yet another example of why I want Frank and Gerard to stop smoking.

They need to read this story.

Seriously. I'll throw a paper airplane at them while they're on stage.

I...might get arrested...BUT WHO CARES?! XD

I love the amount of detail you use for things, but more importantly I like your style. No one will ever be able to copy it. You win at life.

oohhhh my goodness.
i loovvveeeed that update
it is my favorite chapter yet. seriously.

...and it just keeps getting better.

I don't know why more people don't read your stories. Seriously. They're missing out on greatness.

Wow. Just wow. That's some beautiful writing, you're so talented.

this is SO AMAZING I CANT BELIEVE IM RESORTING TO ALL CAPS.
you are such an incredible writer.

here are some of my favorite lines:

Svetlana smiled, leaning in to press her lips against Andrew’s cheek, running her hand through his glossy hair. He shrugged at me, his expression of mock confusion distorted by lust.

I was gone, my new dress swishing behind me.

I can envision the scene so vividly,
I love this story so much

very good chapter, dark and sucked you into it, making you feel as if you were there watching it all happen. More When You Can Please?!

very well written.
Worth reading it.
Good job!

wow, this is so amazing.
its so dark...
i love it.

Ahaha. Owned parental unit. :mrgreen:

Ahh, I'm in love with your story! (Probably more then healthy) I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next update.

What else do you want me to say about how much you pwn the world? You took all the good words already.

Another beautiful chapter. The imagery you use never fails to amaze me...it's so simple, but incredibly detailed at the same time, and easy to understand without being mind-numbingly clear and thrown in our faces.

I also love how you're only giving us a little of the story at a time while the rest of the world is passing the character by. It really helps put her life and mindset into perspective.

I stared at it for so long that my contacts dried up.

I'm serious. I just couldn't look away. Your writing has amazed me before and continues to do so now. Your descriptions...just...flawless. My English teacher would be envious. You use so many metaphors and comparisons that I would never even think of...

I am put to shame and so happy for it.