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  • Average Lifesaver;;

    Average Lifesaver;; (655)

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    Hey! I was hosting the contest for Heart Ache Stories and I'm finally getting around to finishing these up.

    Ooooh, slightly sadistic. It's a nice change from the, "He died, now I'm offing myself," or the, "He left me, so I'm going to cut myself." It's short, but it's a change from the typical teen drama... It's good, though(: Great job!
    November 8th, 2010 at 11:34pm
  • MandaPandaxDD

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    Dang girl. I wish I could write like that. Grab the heart with words like you do. Describe emotions. Show love. Anything. It's beautiful.
    January 30th, 2010 at 11:41pm
  • sylviaplath1

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    I really like it, especially how you described every emotion and how the pain felt.
    January 30th, 2010 at 04:55pm