hi hun... I have to say this chapter was very confusing... cos you forgot to putt " " between the lines sometimes. the lines we mixed up with her/ville/friend.
I suggest you to fix that..someone might find that a reason to report it. I know is stupid.
2 chapters up but going really slowly... I meant the story. Is very short. I hope your next update is much longer and is not about 10 min situation. Don't get me wrong... I surtenly wanna read more