Sweet Charlotte - Comments

I loved this. Very horrorific, disgusting, yet beautiful piece of work.

Continue to write, you're one of the better authors on Mibba:)...

hi darling, i just read through all of your stories. you are an excellent writer and they were all amazing, but i really loved this one the most. i'm not sure if this was coincidence or not but your title "sweet charlotte" reminds me of a black and white film called "hush hush sweet charlotte." she was an old, withered woman who still thought in the mind of a child. she was very haunted by her past and unaccepting of the things that had happened to her. of course, your story is entirely different, but because of my love for this movie, i pictured your entire story in black and white and it made it extremely eerie and haunting. i thought you went somewhere most people would never go, and you used subtle words that still painted a very ugly picture. i dunno how to even explain, it was a very beautiful story. i was sad to see it end. you are so awesome and dark, girl.

vveerrryyy nice :)

Wow.
I'm not quite sure what to say. And I'm not even sure if I loved it or what. But my God.
It was...so scary. And creepy. And weird. And ohmyGod.

But you know, you followed the rules perfectly. I saw no mistakes in spelling or grammar. And your paragraph structure was perfect. Your writing is definitely really good, that much is apparent, but your details were even more impressive.
And I LOVE your layout. <3

Good luck in my contest! (:

this is so good, dude.
not even kidding.
i really like it!

HOLY FREAKIN' CRAP.
this story sends shivers down my spine.
this is amazing, seriously.

This is awesome. C:

FRIGGING EPIC. Dude, this is really kind of scary - like that little kid singing? FREAKY SHIT - but I think I like it. You better post another chapter soon, mmkay? :D Love you dollface.

POST SOON, I seriously can't wait for you to write this. And, uhm, your layout making skills totally own mine, end of story. (: