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  • Stained Glass Eyes.

    Stained Glass Eyes. (200)

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    The ending where he ended up killing her somewhat confused me, but still a nice plot and all :)
    April 24th, 2011 at 07:31pm
  • still a secret

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    I really liked the first “I’m not insane, I’m not insane.” line. :)
    Though there were errors, and some things felt too sudden, I liked the plot in general. :)
    April 1st, 2010 at 06:58pm
  • K. Shadows

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    This story has won 2nd place!! It was so creative and I loved how you put actual song lyrics in the story! Thank you so much for participating!
    March 14th, 2010 at 07:45pm
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