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  • ColetteCatastrophe

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    @BringVengeance
    1. This is their story not yours so they'll write as much as they want to. Ic you don't lime it too bad.
    2. Eli's life is extremely complicated thus entailing drama which also happens to make the story more interesting.
    3. Not that many people have touched Eli.
    4. People can be more naive than you realize.
    5. Shaun likes her. Get over it.
    6. As far as I can tell Xander and Liz are more dominant than they were in Kings.
    7. Everybody else seems to like Eli.
    8. His name is SHAUN. Not Shane, SHAUN. Got it?
    August 8th, 2010 at 10:04am
  • SynnerSaynt

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    You're fine, hun. Take your time- I'm a dedicated reader and love the stories.
    Keep up the great work!
    March 31st, 2010 at 03:16am
  • taylorbean

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    ...-cough- his name is shaun.
    February 15th, 2010 at 09:01am
  • BringVengeance

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    I'm so angry with you two. I want one thing and one thing only; longer chapters. Maybe you should set a word limit per chapter. When i'm writing a long novel i usually set out to have 100,000 words in all. per chapter i want at least three thousand words but that's usually when i write on fictionpress; even so can you make them a little longer? I've been faithful to this story and would love to be rewarded with something more than a smidget to read.

    Anyways Eli, for reason beyond me, annoys me to a large extent. She always has some sort of drama and my god how many men has she let touch her? The guard - i know that wasn't her fault but honestly how naive can you be? Now this Jack dude. Yuck why would Shane want her after everyone has had a chance to tap that? I kind of want you guys to focus on Xander and Elizabeth they always seem to be background characters and i actually like them.

    Shane, sure, the dude has a kid with her but come the fuck on! She's irritating. Very, very, very irritating. She says she was asinine when she was seventeen; she's still asinine & it's annoying!
    Have i mentioned how annoying she is? okay well happy i got that point across.

    Well i have to give you guys props, at least you actually got an emotion out of the reader :P
    February 15th, 2010 at 08:55am
  • justhannah;

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    can't wait till ya update! this is getting goooood.
    February 12th, 2010 at 07:14am
  • taylorbean

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    It is indeed M Shadows (:
    February 10th, 2010 at 09:08am
  • LamePanda

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    hey that's m shadows
    February 10th, 2010 at 08:42am
  • justhannah;

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    Loved it! XD I'm so excited for this story :)
    February 1st, 2010 at 08:53am
  • SynnerSaynt

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    OOoohhhh! The real party will be in Shaun and Eli's room! lol
    January 31st, 2010 at 08:06am
  • Lynnie Vicious

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    impatiently awaiting the first chapter (:
    January 31st, 2010 at 04:05am
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