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  • CallMeSkittles

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    lol :)

    such a cute chapter! ^_^
    xxx
    February 9th, 2010 at 09:09am
  • MCRisMyHero

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    aaah! :D:D:D
    February 9th, 2010 at 08:32am
  • Danishh

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    wooooooo more updateysss =D
    This storyyyyy is soooo gooood
    and I agree with the people before me
    Its so good not having them jumping on top of eachother after 30 minutes of knowing eachother haha
    you is vewwy smartt
    I hope the coldness of your wintery timess doesnt bother you too much, and once again, ABSOLUTELY ADOREE THE STORYY
    yayayayayayayay
    update soon please haha
    yes.
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    begging.
    and.
    its.
    worth.
    it.
    =D =D o your fuckin awesome too
    talk later probablyy
    February 9th, 2010 at 07:19am
  • watermelon smiles.

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    Oh my god, I absolutely adored these last three updates.
    I'm so happy Frank's opening up to Gerard more.
    It makes me really happy :]
    And I'm pretty proud of you, too, for not having them kiss yet.
    I hate it when stories are way too rushed like that.
    It definitely seems more realistic with how their relationship is progressing right now.
    I lovelovelove this story! Can't wait for more!
    February 9th, 2010 at 04:44am
  • distorted.eyes

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    I love this story. I love how its not all rushed and they're not fucking each others brains out. cuz some stories start with sex and like, no one besides pediphiles and pervs want to read that stuff. so anyway i love this story. did i already say that? oh well. <33
    February 9th, 2010 at 03:26am
  • Frank_Iero

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    okay so i just read this all and im IN LOVE!

    the relationship is so freaking cute and not rushed and just perfect. i hate when its rushed and the people are saying i love you after about ten minutes....

    so yeah i cant wait for more :D
    February 9th, 2010 at 01:17am
  • RedPaw

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    XD Yeah, It was pretty long. :P

    now this one's gonna be short,, because I've already tokld you everything. :(

    Not making them kiss is a good thing! Making the characters kiss quickly makes me sad, it seems not as real! Not that I'd have anything against them kisssing soon, as long as it's not random. Like; "OMGWEVKISSNOOOWWWW!!!" THEN "OMGWEHAVESEXNOOOWWWW!!!" in about 2 paragraphs, coz that makes me sad. :D

    Yay! Updates! :3 Thank you for dragging me away from talking to iGod about rape...

    -grins- I'm grinning now! And the Glow in the dark nail varinsh has gone in my eye, and I have to go to bed, but I'm still happy!

    Thank God for you!

    <3
    February 8th, 2010 at 11:43pm
  • RedPaw

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    <3

    You kow, I'm very sorry for not commenting, I read this yesterday at.. about 12 pm, before my internet died (taking my Tech and Art homework with it), and if I had had a chance to comment, it would be on how I love this story.

    I love how Gerard and Frank are intimate enough for it to make happy butterflies fly around (Woah, that sounds random, but Frerardy stuff makes my tummy happy, it eats it!) but aren't all "OMGWEHAVESEXNOOOWWWW!!!"

    And Frank's mum isn't a bitch. So many stories make the parents be all evil, and I like how they aren't in yours, it makes it so much more enjoyable.

    At first I thought it was weird adding Lucas in, because There are already the Way brothers, but Lucas is really cool, He and Mikey's personalities seem to be slightly oppisite, which is fun.

    Mikey is really funny, He thinks that Frank is a murderer, Which he might be, we don't know....

    Wow, this is the longest comment I've written, usually I don't exeed 5 lines, or ramble on about my life instead of the story...

    ANYWAY.

    -ahem-

    An Update would put a grin on my emotiannly scarrred day. (I'm not really, Apparently Kicking me is supposed to emotionlly harm me and calling me a faggot is also meant yo offend me, when clearly I'm a girl and I've already declared my un-dying love to said insult bringer)... I'll shut up now. :3

    <3 x2!
    February 8th, 2010 at 11:05pm
  • CallMeSkittles

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    oh its all about sleep overs!
    i saw Avatar with my dad, it was good until about half way through when i really needed to pee, i couldnt leave cz i wanted to know what happened. THEE MOST uncomfortable thing i had to do was wait till the long ass film was over ... worth it though ^_^ [like you needed to know that little bit of information of my life there]
    xxx
    February 8th, 2010 at 10:14pm
  • Venganza

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    This is so good, I want moreeeeeeeeee :). Sleepover at Frank's sounds fun.
    February 8th, 2010 at 09:14pm
  • MCRisMyHero

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    I love this so fucking much!
    more tonight? <3
    February 8th, 2010 at 09:08pm
  • xXooohpieceofcandyXx

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    I thought the last two chapters were really great, I read the first one before school, and I must say it started my day off great! So please update soon as you can :)
    February 8th, 2010 at 09:06pm
  • nearly witches.

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    Haha i only read the last chapter about 5 minutes before the new one was up ^_^
    I actually about died laughing at Lucas, no joke :')
    Ooh, sleepover...
    More soon?
    February 8th, 2010 at 08:50pm
  • nearly witches.

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    N'AWW! Cuteness overload ^_^
    More soon?
    February 8th, 2010 at 08:43pm
  • CallMeSkittles

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    aww loved it like every chapter!
    i want franks mum,
    if my mum found out i did the shit he was up to i would be on the streets by now lol
    xxx
    February 8th, 2010 at 08:26pm
  • MCRisMyHero

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    you're amazing too!
    I loved the update <33
    February 8th, 2010 at 03:34pm
  • Danishh

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    yayyyy they are connecting awww!!!
    haha ive always wanted to learn the guitar, but my hands are way to small :(
    love from baby hands hahaha
    February 8th, 2010 at 12:49pm
  • IvoryJaied

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    I'm already late for school but... YAY! Frank's talking! :)
    February 7th, 2010 at 09:44pm
  • watermelon smiles.

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    naww... poor Frank...
    I love how sweet Gerard is to him. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :3
    February 7th, 2010 at 09:09pm
  • kizza :D

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    OMG
    its awesome! i luv how u do 2 chapters at a time!
    i luv ur story!
    UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
    February 7th, 2010 at 08:19pm