Wow. This is so beautiful. I love it so much You are an amazing writer We The Kings are awesome I'll never be able to listen to that song without thinking of this story again That's a good thing This is sad, but so touching
Aww, that's pretty sweet. Sad that he died, and the way Hunter was coping with it was recalling all the memories. Which, did turn out bad because he let the waves takes him away. It's great how it was relating to that song, the way the words connected with it. Well done!
I really liked it. (: I felt that it Captured the song really well. I didn't spot any Spelling or Grammer Errors so Cudos to you. You did a really good job. I could practically taste the salty air on my tongue when you were describing the beach.
Ohmigod. I loved it. Amazingggg(: <3 Fantabulous. You're an amazing writer(: I swear. You need to make this into a more than a oneshot. A story. (Minus the fact that Drew is dead) That'd be epic. And I'd totally read it(: Amazing job! And good luck m'dear(: Even if you don't win, you're gonna get like an honorable mention in MY contest(: <3
This is so beautiful.
I love it so much
You are an amazing writer
We The Kings are awesome
I'll never be able to listen to that song without thinking of this story again
That's a good thing
This is sad, but so touching