Elisa - Comments

  • carousel kid.

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    That was really powerful. It was written beautifully, I liked the characters and the storyline.
    It was so sweet.

    My favourite line:
    Would she scream, would she faint, would she do nothing and move on, disregarding a simple stranger…a stranger who found her beautiful?
    April 22nd, 2010 at 08:47am
  • lions

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    ^ Ironically I'm watching Titanic right now

    This story was really sweet, I love the flower for the banner.
    April 5th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • jasonsudekis

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    I really liked it! It sort of reminded me of Titanic, you know, how Jack and Rose meet when she's about to jump off the boat.

    It was very well written and flowed beautifully. Good job!
    February 3rd, 2010 at 04:03am
  • Sundance Kid.

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    I loved it :D
    February 2nd, 2010 at 03:23am
  • Scream.Whisper

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    I loved this
    great story :]
    February 1st, 2010 at 04:58pm