Watching Over You - Comments

Me.Am.Weird (100)

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when will you update ?

January 31st, 2014 at 09:09am

Miranda meanie Pants (100)

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Oh my gosh this is such an amazing story!! Please update soon!!! :D

July 6th, 2012 at 04:29am

Bluecaty15 (100)

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I love it please update again very soon!! i hope she comes back to Jasper, and they have kids!!!

January 25th, 2012 at 11:02pm

XxChainedFairytalexX (100)

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please update!

November 2nd, 2010 at 10:35pm

Fire and Ash. (100)

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Love It!!! They Can't Kill Hayden!, She Is Pure Human!!!! Update Please?!?!? XD

July 26th, 2010 at 03:28pm

heyit'sjordan_ (100)

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Make her come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please

July 7th, 2010 at 11:34am

iFeel.Like.A.Monster (100)

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I love what you did.

February 22nd, 2010 at 12:57am

Le Lion (200)

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Whoa, My Chemical Romance reference :) "Heaven, help us."
Keep it up! I'm still in love with this story. Take as much time as you need!

February 20th, 2010 at 11:47pm

Xtreme-malfunction (100)

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this is amazing. i love your writing style, very poetic. gah! i just want her to pop up and yell BOO! and jasper to cheer up. XD

February 15th, 2010 at 10:43am

Mrs. Ninja Jones (100)

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The time better be right soon.

February 9th, 2010 at 05:46am

brokenarrow (100)

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yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

February 7th, 2010 at 07:34am

Le Lion (200)

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Don't worry about the shortness of the chapters because I like them :)
Jasper's floating through life and doesn't notice much and I think you portray that well with the length of the chapters.
Great update once again :)

February 4th, 2010 at 02:40am

Le Lion (200)

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I like how it reads like poetry. Jasper because he hurts so much that all he thinks about is Haydee. And Haydee because all she can do is think really.
I really love it :)

February 2nd, 2010 at 09:27pm

brokenarrow (100)

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dun dun dun DUNNNN

February 1st, 2010 at 10:21pm

Aliyah-loves-A7x (100)

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Jasper
buddy
she is an angel you dumb fuck
she gave her life to save all if yours
she did the greatest thing a person can do
that is why Edward is hopeful

this was amazing

February 1st, 2010 at 06:17am

brokenarrow (100)

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bless her heart. we all miss her.

that would be SO cool if she popped out as rose's baby.

February 1st, 2010 at 05:36am

Le Lion (200)

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Well at least she is kind of sort of not dead (completely)? Can't wait till this gets started!

February 1st, 2010 at 05:24am